![]() Her hair, Her breasts, Her lips, Her breasts, Her eyes, Her breast. Don’t fathers despise tattoos?’ ‘Perhaps he’s open-minded.’ ‘That one, on the left he’s covered in tattoos. While a few chapters back the same character curses every other sentence). ‘And you all are bullies.’ (Grown man saying this, because he does not get his way. ![]() ‘What kind of squeeze? Like a friendship squeeze? Maybe it was a friendship squeeze.’ (Don’t forget, this is a grown woman, who speaks in such manner). But you don’t need to be that man right now.’ (These lines were said by the love interest to the MC and they made me pretty much cringe). Always being the man you need to be the man everyone else needs you to be. Enough to crush any other man, but not you. The way the characters talk, feels awkward and unnatural. Which makes it impossible to read and take seriously. This novel is full of cliché lines and awkward sentences. That being said, I reviewed this book using the following criteria: Also, me critiquing a book is not a personal attack on the author, no matter who they may be. And me liking the author, will not sway my opinion in this review. ![]() I am subscribed to the YouTube channel of the author. ** I received the ARC of The Savior’s Champion in exchange for an honest review. * This updated review contains spoilers for The Savior’s Champion. ![]()
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